Naffis-kun wrote:By Your Command
I command my dominion
Every hearts and all opinion
Hide me, guide me, dry my tears
Slowly taking back the years
By your command! By your command! By your comrads!
Is it really "comrades"? It sounds like it but that doesn't really make sense to me. I could be wrong. We all know (or should) that Dev likes lyrics for how they sound more than if they make sense.
Naffis-kun wrote:No! I know all I am! And we're not, we're not too plain for all I have learned, no, we're not to believe
I think this line is "No! I know all I am! And we're not, we're not to blame for all I have learned [could be "heard"], no, we're not to blame!
Naffis-kun wrote:Over and over and over, you live it again!
Making your friend
I hear... "Over and over and over, you live it again!
(Hold it! Touch it! Take it!) Make it your friend!
Naffis-kun wrote:You have not convinced mighty Ziltoid!
I am so omniscient, if there was to be two omnisciences, I would be both!
Prepare yourselves for the subjucation!
Sorry to nitpick, but it's spelled "subjugation."
Naffis-kun wrote:Hide me, guide me, dry my tears!
By Your Command!
Slowly taking back...
Now I know all I ask is we're not, we're not too plain for all I have heard, no, we're not to believe
Over and over and over, you live it again!
Making your friend!
I'd make the same changes I outline above. This section repeats.
Naffis-kun wrote:Oh the physical race... your time
Oh its physical grace..
Gone to fall
far?
Naffis-kun wrote: for the universe
Gone to fall for the real home
Gone to fall for the universe
The universe..
Trying.. oh I'm physical.. I'm flying.. faaa-aaall..
Oh the physical pain. I'm deep in lies, I'm sane.
-Commander..
-Yes, Captain Ziltoid?
-Have the humans delivered their ultimate cup of coffee?
-I have it right here, sir.
-Yeh.. FETID! How dare they present this to me? Foul! They hide their finest bean.
You forgot the [slurrrrp] between "Yeh" and "FETID!"

Naffis-kun wrote:-Prepare the attack!
-Commander Ziltoid, the humans are preparing themselves for the attack!
-EXCELLENT! Have you prepared the Planet Smasher?
-Yeeees, I have
I hear, "Yeeesssss, my looooord!" (And again with different inflection after Ziltoid's next line.
Naffis-kun wrote:-Indeed. On my word.
-No resting here, men! We represent the planet Earth!
I want no heroes! Here's gonna be a legion of shitstorm on us! We have you ready! They're coming over the horizon as we speak! We have you ready to take them down! Hold your position, men! Do not fire until I tell you to fire! Have you got that?
-Yes, Captain!
-Right, hold your position! Ziltoid, he comes!
Hold! Ready!!!!!
GO GO GO BEFORE SHE GOES BOOM BOOM
This sounds pretty good to me. Well done on the transcription!!!
Looping green and blue, and you will go letting yourself certainly the meal once again through the head. But after the departure, you feel free and happily like after your first orgasm - and you will beg for addition. - German review of SYL's "Alien"