hEy peeps.

I am borowing a fiends Boss 1600CD.

So to teach myself how to use a little of it, I made this track that I have posted on myspace.

Please check it out. Okay it's not really complete, but its out there free to hear, so please check it out and let me know what you think.

heheh... forgot to post the link;

http://www.myspace.com/ravenzwire

The riffs are mighty cool! I dig the samples too. If you were able to add some reverb or something to the guitar that might make things sound a bit more epic. Quite joy overall!

Michael Jackson gone industrial metal? Hehe, sorry, the beat just gave me that thought for some reason.

Really though, it sounds good. It reminds me of Prong on the 'Cleansing' album. The guitar seems a bit out of tune with the keyboard in some parts, but other than that it's great-- especially if it's a demo or rough mix.

Also, it seems you have a couple guitar tracks there, but you may want to pan them farther out-- eg. one far left and one far right. They're kinda feeling all lumped in the middle right now. Some vocals might help the song quite a bit as well; it's a bit repetative as it stands. Not horribly so, but the main riff is repeated quite a lot.

yeh, cheers.... I love what you dudes have said,
It is a rough mix... just one day from inventing the riff, recording mixing adding samples and uploading to the web.

hahah... yes the beat... I have just looped some cheesy rock beat thats on the boss 1600. I've given the track to my friend who is a drummer to try and practice a real drumbeat, then I'll take the boss to the rehearsal studio and record his drums to get a more human sound.

Also, Ive given the track to another mate who is a better guitarist than I. He might try to get a cool lead down which will make the track more dynamic/less repeatative.

Now vocals??? I dont know any singers, and I sound like a frog with down syndrome (Im insulting my self, not frogs or people with downsyndrome)

Anyway, cheers for checkin it out... Its a work in progress.

There is another track I plan on completing on monday and uploading. Its a much faster, almost punkish with some crazy samples I recorded of my brother. (he is ansane and the track I think is quiet funny) Trying to nail a bass line for it, but I dont play bass heaps. At the moment it is messy. I'll p[ost here when it's finished just incase anyones interesteed in hearing more of my crap.

Thanks again to those who chescked out that track, It means alot to me, and so do your comments. cheers.

OKAY!!!

We were trying to take the piss out of ronald macdonald, but ended up morphing into one fucked up clown.
This new track is about as punk As I get.
My brother was doing like an improv comedy sketch on ronald macdonald, and i remembered a riff that i used to play a little while back... and this new track is what came of it.

Please have a listen, It might make you laugh, or you might think its just more of my crap. I think the later.