I really want to start up a band, i'm getting bored playing down here in my basement all alone. So i made this song to hopefully play with some other people here it is.

http://www.mp3lizard.com/download.cfm?id=17355 this one sounds best.

heres a stream version on http://www.myspace.com/enemywithinus

please tell me what you think.

[djskrimp]

YOu have what we in the industry call...umm, "talent"....go forth and mutiply that fruit

The drum sequencing is off a bit, but overall it's good. It sounds like an instrumental, though. Yes, I know it IS an instrumental, but it doesn't sound like a track that you could turn into a song with vocals.

i had to play the drums on my keyboard instead of program them, i want to learn how to program them soon with some better drums also. It wasn't meant to be an instrumental but i see your point, it might be hard to fit vocals in there. thanks all

not really my thing dude, but i have to say fuckin tight guitar work... especially with al the little trills during the thrash beats...decent guitar tone though...

Bloody Hell! This one's quite fast! Very talented, but I do agree with Eyesore : it sounds like an instrumental. Go Ahead!

[Blazingmonga]

Love this song! Excellent production. It might sound cool with vocals, but I can quite happily listen to it as it is.

I have actually been listening to this all week, but I forgot to post here after I downloaded it. Stupid me.

wow thanks all, i definitely agree with eyesore i wish i had some good drumkit from hell programming skills. I think things would sound a hell of alot better. I got some new masterfing software also so hopefully the new stuff will sound alot better. Again thanks

just downloaded it...tis awesome! Really great work, dude

It's really cool. I like it.

Maybe the fast parts are a little to fast. I always concider that good speed on a fast song always have to a bit below sounding as being fast forwarded.

[Blazingmonga]

I have decided that the best bit about this song is the scary synths at the start and end....sends a chill down my spine every time! Awesome!