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Hey all in devy forum world... Ive put up a new track... not the one I said I was working on... this little idea rapidly grew in the last couple of days... once again an unfinished sound.... out there to get opinions on how i could make it better. The guitar needs a fine tune... I need a new bass, and I need a voice, and a bit more skill... but it is what it is... please check it out.

"Selfish Entity" at http://www.myspace.com/ravenzwire

Hey ppl.

It would mean alot to me if you could check out my new tracks on myspace. I feel an improvement over what I used to make.

Awaiting Wizard is the latest thing I've made. Please have a listen if you got the time

http://www.myspace.com/ravenzwire

that's some sweet stuff you've got goin on there man! I think you should put an effect on the vocals to broaden them out a bit because they don't seem so up in the mix. and yeah, get a seven string, they're fun =].

Sounds cool, reminds me of the album 'The Cleansing' by prong, if just for the drum sound and guitar tone. (Have I said this before? I think these tunes were posted on another board awhile ago, maybe SYL)

The strings in 'Awaiting Wizard' are a bit obviously midi, but otherwise it sounds good-- nice vocal work. I really like 'Hypocrite', very cool melodic instrumental thing. Keep it up!

hey.

Cheers for having a look and the replies; awesome.

Yeh, this was my first attempt at vocals for me. A better studio set up and better mic would probably help. Maybe the choice of efects for them were wrong, it was running through me pedal for the effect, recorded live, spur of the moment thing, thats where my tunes come from.

Hey I dont mind Progns sound so I'll Take that as a huge compliment.

I have posted my myspace site here before, but since then all the tracks have rotated, nothing on there now that was when I originally posted it.

I do have another something on the boil that I feel is sofar better than the others, so Im trying not to rush the idea like most things I've done. But hopefully I'll have the idea down soon.

well please do let us know when you've got your ideas recorded, because we'll be eagerly waiting to hear it.

PS
the timing for music done by someone with limited supplies is absolutely superb! your sense of rhythm amazes me

hey... I editted my first post, and have a new track up... please check it out.... post number one explains it all.

Cheers; ravenzwire.