Hey team, I made this short synth song and decided to post it here.
This is actually perhaps the first time I'm trying to make something less ambient.
But now it sounds less organized.

http://japani.nappis.net/blackkimono/blackorchestra.mp3

I think the reason it sounds less 'organized' is because it seems to jump from place to place far too quickly. It sounds a bit like the song has ADD, if that makes sense. They're good compositions, but you don't spend nearly enough time on each part of the song, building on it and sort of making it evolve into the next piece... Instead it kind of just jumps right in without much transition. It sounds good though, I think you just need to work on the songwriting/structure a bit.

Also, your samples are godly. What are you using? It sounds like it's being played on a keyboard, but with much better samples than what I'm used to. I'd kill for samples like those.

I think the reason it sounds less 'organized' is because it seems to jump from place to place far too quickly. It sounds a bit like the song has ADD, if that makes sense. Laughing They're good compositions, but you don't spend nearly enough time on each part of the song, building on it and sort of making it evolve into the next piece... Instead it kind of just jumps right in without much transition. It sounds good though, I think you just need to work on the songwriting/structure a bit.

Yeah you're right. The main reason to this is the fact that sometimes I happen to record a good melody but can't play it again so I have to use it as a 10 second clip and that way I end up compiling a song out of 10 second clips..
I guess I'll go try to make the structure a little smoother by adding stuff.. but it's difficult. I'm gonna work on this one for a while now and then upload the new version.

Also, your samples are godly. What are you using? It sounds like it's being played on a keyboard, but with much better samples than what I'm used to. I'd kill for samples like those.

EWQLSO . (Eastwest Quantum Leap Symphonic Orchestra) the Silver Bundle edition

apart from some particular chords and repetitve parts, HELL IT ROCKS!!!!!