http://typh.com/nams/music/zuno.mp3

This was written and recorded a few months ago. I used Fruity Loops 5 Studio with the Drumkit From Hell sample pack, two Dean V electrics through a Behringer V-Amp 2, a Simon & Patrick acoustic with Fishman Preamps and Cakewalk Sonar 4 Producer Edition for the tracking. I haven't really shared it with many people that weren't close friends, so I m looking for some raw opinions here. Constructive criticism, please.

Cheers.

Bit more selectiveness would be nice, I think. Sounds bit messy for me.

Or maybe my headphones are shite.